Kyle’s writing fits his ‘about me’ page. His unorthodox techniques and crafty writing style shows that he is willing to step out of the box and write. He deciphers his background information, than his personal insight gives him credibility. Kyle is very good at leaving his point strong in the readers’ minds.
Hillary uses her own insight as a base for her writing. She will give her insight, than she will use facts and scholarly writing as proof for her position. She is very specific in her personal stories and that is a very strong point in her writing. She surely puts time and honesty in her writing, and that builds a genuine bond with the reader.
Jaime uses quotes and conversation more effectively than nearly anyone in the class. She can insert them into any type of essay, and it is very efficient. She will use a conversation, introduce some scholarly information, and bring the reader back to her perspective. When Jaime uses these quotes, I feel like I am there, and I understand her background more than I could without. She is a creative writer first and foremost.
Jessica thrives on information. She is a very serious writer, and this can lead to her writing to being very dense. She is very analytical, and I feel that her wanting to be a nurse originally is a direct correlation to that. She uses information as her main source of the body of her essays. Her analysis brings into perspective her point of view.
Posted by zwic7726 on December 9, 2008
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